Natural Nirvana II
Natural Nirvana II Long ago, now, the text begins... Outside, a child pulls a wagon. Not a Radio Flyer, a beechwood hearse. Cornhusk doll, laid out in a wagon. This is not Middleburg, but another...
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just for the curious, Natural Nirvana (one) is on the beach. here. The other forum where we do seven in sevens.
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Alison- I had commented on this when you posted it on the Beach.I do like what you have here. One suggestion and since I'm not an expert in this form, take it with a grain of salt. Is it possible to...
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It's a good idea, maybe. But it does violate the form. Ideally, the read should NOT be difficult, which would mean I've not mastered the form. very likely, that's true.
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It maybe just reading it on a monitor I'm having trouble with; instead of in hard copy. I have a hard time focusing with the glare. I design websites and long lines are a no no, but then this isn't...
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but you're right. it doesn't sit well on this page. In fact it doesn't fit.thanks for the kind words,Alison
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I am deeply moved by your poem. I feel the grief, made poignant by the innocence of a small child. As I read, I am missing things but that intrigues me more. I am convinced that art takes on its' own...
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Michael, thanks so much for sharing your response! That's always a gift.Alison
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hey Kathleen, nice to see you thank you for your thoughts I know what you mean about MO
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Ghazal of The Turning Wagon WheelLong ago, now,.. the text begins. Outside, a child pulls a beige wagon.Not a Radio Flyer, a beechwood hearse. Cornhusk doll, laid out, in a wagon.This is not...
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